One Deep Breath-Fibs
eyes
lock
time stops
old loves meet
breathless lips touch softly
hearts healed they continue on
Has it happened that you've unexpectedly run into an old flame? For a second you're stopped in time, your heart beating wildly, palms getting suddenly sweaty. You stop, perhaps exchange awkward greetings, until, no words left, you gently and sadly kiss goodbye.
posted by Becca at Tuesday, June 27, 2006
15 Comments:
Love the photography
I don't know if this counts, but I heard yesterday that I man I was crazy about, and who lied to me, has gotten married. It's left me with a strange sadness.
Oops. Love this poem and the picture. I got a little carried away from the subject at hand. :)
I
love
your fib
exquisite
writing about old
loves crossing our paths again
I love this photo, it's great.
This is very poignant for me at the moment as an old love is returning from sea soon and we are meeting up....feel both excitement and nostaglia, along with a little sadness for the mix.
Love the fib..:)
Thanks for stopping by my blog. Pleased to hear that I'm not the only obsessive :)
wow...this left me...breathless...
that's a fabulous picture, becca - they're holding a heart! and a lovely poem.
great job! that photo is really cool!
AWESOME! You got me in the heart :) Photo and fib were fab!
Fabulous fib, Becca! I love the photo accompanying. These fibs have sort of taken me by surprise; I'm surprised how much I like them.
oh, Becca, this is wonderful! It's usually such a let-down to return from a vacation but reading the responses from this week's prompt has made today so delightful!!
oh, Becca, this is wonderful! It's usually such a let-down to return from a vacation but reading the responses from this week's prompt has made today so delightful!!
this made my heart skip a beat!
wonderful photo and fib!
Wonderful photo and poem to match! Just beautiful!
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