Tuesday, October 24, 2006

One Deep Breath-Mystery

invisible artist
traces crystal patterns
on my window
~
icy filagree
frosting the lawn~
nature's lace

I'm fascinated by the intricate patterns created by frost and snow, as if a mysterious artist were at work all night, patiently etching these delicate designs on the earth.

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Blogger susanlavonne said...

"filagree frosting"...LOVE this...both are delicate and charming.
the photo is breathtaking :-)

10/24/2006  
Anonymous bella said...

I love your haiku. The frost is very mysterious, leaving beautiful designs for us to enjoy. Nice.

10/24/2006  
Blogger Helen said...

Becca... this haiku is beautiful. The words and picture work perfectly together. Very well done.....

10/24/2006  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Both your haiku are gorgeous! I love the lacy effect of frost on windows and covering trees, bushes, etc. Your haiku perfectly captures this elusive beauty.

10/24/2006  
Blogger Star said...

I love to look at frost patterns too. What determines the patterns they make

And you've captured them so well in haiku. Loved "filagree frosting" and "nature's icing"

It was 22 degrees here this morning, so I'm guessing this pictures just might be possible where you are.

10/24/2006  
Blogger Tammy said...

This is a magnificent mystery and your haiku was very yummy. Time to make that fab soup! Beautimus!

10/24/2006  
Anonymous Sandy said...

Just beautiful!!!
The mystery of creation.

10/24/2006  
Blogger SombraKnight said...

This morning I got in my jeep and I sat there for a while looking at the ice crystals on the windows. I thought of how beautiful they were...each one so perfect...
Your words fit that moment beautifully.

10/24/2006  
Anonymous Crafty Green POet said...

Your photo and words are beautiful and complement each other perfectly. I love the patterns of frost too.

10/25/2006  
Blogger Endment said...

Wonderful frost embroidery... you have created a perfect match

10/25/2006  
Anonymous Pearl said...

Gorgeous.

Great pairing of image and word.

Almost makes me look forward to winter

10/27/2006  

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